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Feb. 10th, 2006
I just dug up two pieces of original fiction that I wrote a year ago. I'm intensely proud of both of them (especially Another Step) and would love any feedback. (Especially you, Sara - I'd love to know what you think.) And I swear I'm not depressed like these stories make me seem. I'm just somehow much better at capturing pain and despair than comedy or love or anything happy. Heh.
Title: Another Step
Author: Anne (![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
starsouls1013)
Rating: PG-13
Summary/Teaser: She did not feel the jagged edges of the broken stalks as they scraped the soft skin of her feet. Her footprints glistened crimson in her wake, marking her trail of small scale destruction.
A/N: There really is no context for this. The beginning sprang from my mind, and I just ran with it.
( Another Step )
Title: Obsidian Eyes
Author: Anne (starsouls1013)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: A young man tells his story of loneliness, temptation, and loss.
A/N: The narrator is male. Everyone assumes it's a woman because I am - but nope! This was written for a creative writing assignment for AP English last year. And if you don't know, obsidian is a kind of rock, completely black, shiny, and very hard.
( Obsidian Eyes )
Title: Another Step
Author: Anne (
starsouls1013)Rating: PG-13
Summary/Teaser: She did not feel the jagged edges of the broken stalks as they scraped the soft skin of her feet. Her footprints glistened crimson in her wake, marking her trail of small scale destruction.
A/N: There really is no context for this. The beginning sprang from my mind, and I just ran with it.
( Another Step )
Title: Obsidian Eyes
Author: Anne (
starsouls1013)Rating: PG-13
Summary: A young man tells his story of loneliness, temptation, and loss.
A/N: The narrator is male. Everyone assumes it's a woman because I am - but nope! This was written for a creative writing assignment for AP English last year. And if you don't know, obsidian is a kind of rock, completely black, shiny, and very hard.
( Obsidian Eyes )
