I found myself drawn in either class to the places where they overlapped I found this sentence a bit odd. I can't put my finger on why it irks me, but when I read it, I had to go back and read it again a few times. You might want to just have a look at it.
Also, should there be a comma here: "Trinity College, Dublin". I don't actually know - just asking!
One last thing; I'm not sure if you should use the word "slogging" in a formal paper. But that's up to you. The rest of it has such a mature tone, and that word doesn't really fit.
This was really great - very informative and very clear writing. I'm sure you'll do well! (p.s. I don't agree with any of the person above's comments, but that's for you to decide)
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Date: 2008-12-07 12:34 pm (UTC)Also, should there be a comma here: "Trinity College, Dublin". I don't actually know - just asking!
One last thing; I'm not sure if you should use the word "slogging" in a formal paper. But that's up to you. The rest of it has such a mature tone, and that word doesn't really fit.
This was really great - very informative and very clear writing. I'm sure you'll do well! (p.s. I don't agree with any of the person above's comments, but that's for you to decide)